Mr. Micawber, Taleteller ([info]mickawber_fics) wrote in [info]takingitinturns,

FIC: "Fortune" by Antosha

To: [info]elysianflowers

Title: Fortune
Author/Artist: Antosha/[info]mickawber_fics
Pairing: Harry/Ginny, Lily/Lysander (off-screen)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3800
Summary: He wanted the best for his daughter. He wanted her to have the wedding of her dreams—he knew that, once the Scamander boy had taken Lily’s hand from his, she would be Harry’s little girl no more. So never mind that Stonehenge hadn’t been the kids’ idea, but Harry’s—he wanted the best.

Cost a fortune? He was supposed to have the bloody fortune to spend!


Author/Artist's Notes: I can't seem to write a Harry/Ginny story whose title doesn't start with the letter F, apparently. [info]elysianflowers, you asked for H/G a little after Lily's off to Hogwarts, when they have a little time on their hands... And I set it even a bit later than that! (Not TOO much later, but... about a decade post-epilogue.)

I hope you enjoy!

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Fortune


“Well,” sighed Harry, rubbing his face in both hands, “how about... I don’t know.... How about we sell the rights to another bloody biography?”

Ginny’s eyebrow barely lifted.

Roger shook his distinguished head. “I’m afraid not, Harry. The market’s there, but the contract on the Skeeter woman’s calls for another ten years as the exclusive authorized biography. It’d cost as much to buy her out as you’d be likely to make.”

Ginny patted Harry’s shoulder; she had to know even suggesting such a step was a sign of how desperate he was. “I could see if any of the teams want to have me.”

He looked at her; she seemed deadly serious. Things were bad. “You haven’t flown competitively since you were pregnant with Albus, love. I mean, they’d be lucky to have you, but...”

Her shoulders slumped.

Roger cleared his throat. “Besides that, it would force you to leave the Prophet, which is, at the moment, your steadiest income stream.”

Both Potters groaned. “Bloody hell,” Harry said, “who knew weddings could cost such a blood fortune?” When Roger Davies looked as if he might point out that, indeed, he had suggested as their solicitor and financial adviser that holding the wedding for Lily and Lysander at Stonehenge on Midsummer’s Night would, in fact, be rather extravagant, Harry just shrugged. “Whatever.”

He wanted the best for his daughter. He wanted her to have the wedding of her dreams—he knew that, once the Scamander boy had taken Lily’s hand from his, she would be Harry’s little girl no more. So never mind that Stonehenge hadn’t been the kids’ idea, but Harry’s—he wanted the best.

Cost a fortune? He was supposed to have the bloody fortune to spend! He was the Boy Who bloody Lived, wasn’t he? Well, long past being a boy, of course, but he was a national hero and the youngest department head in the history of the Aurors. Of course, when he’d signed up, no one had told him that being an Auror—even Head Auror—wasn’t exactly highly remunerative work.

Not that he and Ginny were poverty-striken. It was just that, between his less-than-high-paying job and the fact that his wife had left playing Quidditch to become a journalist—if anything, a career that paid even worse—on top of the costs of raising three kids and sending them to Hogwarts and maintain three—no, four houses, they weren’t exactly rolling in Galleons. The vault at Gringotts was a shadow of its former glory. 

Ron and Hermione were in better financial position than they were at the moment. Bloody hell.

“I could sell my share of Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes.”

“To who?” Ginny asked. “George and Ron would hate having to answer to someone outside of the family, and while they’d be happy to help, I’m sure, that new Russian joke chain means they’re not a whole lot more flush than we are.”

Roger cleared his throat mildly once more. “Yes. I did broach the subject with Angelina. She said that under normal circumstances the company would be more than happy to buy the shares, or even to advance a loan, but...”

“But the cash isn’t there,” Harry grumbled.

Ginny patted the back of his hand. 

“So we’re back to selling off one of the pieces of property.”

Roger tsked, and Ginny let off an exasperated hiss of frustration. They’d circled this more than once. “Which?” she asked, not for the first time. “The Shrieking Shack is Lily and Lysander’s present—that seems a bloody stupid thing to sell to finance their wedding. I suppose we could find a smaller house than Grimmauld Place for ourselves, but with all the work the house needs, and with the mortgage, I doubt we’d clear enough even to pay for the wedding. The farm on Fee Sark... Well, we’d have to ask your cousin and Parvati to move, which we could certainly do, but it seems a nasty trick.”

“And of course, they can’t afford to pay for it,” Harry sighed. Dudley, one-legged, on an Army pension. Parvati, spell-blind, her Ministry diplomatic career gone. No, forcing them to move wasn’t an option. “That leaves... That leaves Godric’s Hollow.”

“Harry.” Ginny peered at him, her brows bowed in concern.

“No, you know it’s the only thing we have to sell at the moment. It’s a pretty good piece of property. I’m sure... I’m sure someone will want it.”

“It just doesn’t seem right,” said Ginny, though it wasn’t with much conviction.

“It’s just a house,” answered Harry, though he didn’t feel any more certain of what he was saying than she had sounded. “What do you think, Roger?”

His face a mask of studied neutrality, their solicitor held his hands out toward them. “It is, of course, your choice. You would need to move quickly, nonetheless.”

“Of course,” Harry and Ginny answered together, utterly devoid of enthusiasm.

Tilting his head, Roger conceded, “But a little time wouldn’t make any difference. May I suggest that you take a day to talk it over? I can delay filing the use permits and such with the Ministry for another day, I am sure.”

Harry nodded, relieved to have another day before the decision had to be made; a part of him wanted to get it over with, but on the whole, he wasn’t ready to put his parents’ house up for sale. Not yet.

Ginny kissed him on the cheek. “We could visit the place. What do you think?”

“Sure,” Harry said, grasping her hand. “Roger, if you could have all of the paperwork ready to sign, we’ll be by at lunchtime, okay?”

Roger smiled his solicitor’s smile. “The paperwork is already ready. And I will look forward to seeing you both tomorrow.”

Harry shook Roger’s hand. “Thanks. And sorry about all of this bollocks.”

Roger’s laugh welled up, warm and genuine—not his office laugh but his after-hours laugh. “Harry, my friend, I’ve been your solicitor for more than twenty years and this is the stickiest problem you’ve ever handed me. May that always be the case!” He took Ginny’s hand and kissed it, and Harry remembered for a flash why he had disliked Roger when they were young. Roger chuckled again, and it was quickly forgotten. “Besides, I get to see your lovely wife twice in a week—more than recompense enough.”

“Lovely, right,” said Ginny, who did indeed look lovely. “Give my love to Lisa.”

“Of course,” Roger said, and walked them to the door.


: :


Ginny’s arm circled Harry’s waist as they walked down Diagon Alley toward the Apparition point near Gringotts. “Sickle for your thoughts?”

“Not thinking,” grunted Harry, staring up into the dim, silvery sky as they moved. “I don’t even know where to start.”

“Harry...” She gave a long sigh as they arrived outside the enormous white marble façade of the bank. “Come on. Let’s go.”

They unsqueezed into the West Country landscape, behind a copse of trees just off of the lane where Bathilda Bagshot had attempted to lure Harry and Hermione to their doom, and Harry blinked his eyes. Not only was the sky here clear and bright, but they had traveled over two hundred miles to the west; the sun still hadn’t set. A lark, startled by their Apparition, no doubt, began to sing in the tree above them.

“I forget how beautiful it is here,” murmured Harry.

Ginny, the country girl born and raised, breathed in deeply. “That’s because you never come during the spring or summer—Halloween and Christmas, and then just to see your parents.”

“True enough,” Harry conceded, breathing in himself, smelling the rich scent of just-mown hay and of lavender. As they stepped out into the lane, he could see lupins bursting from the tufts of grass on either side of the road. He knew that if he walked down the lane and through the square, he would come to the little churchyard where his parents were buried. A jolt of guilt ran through him; how could he sell this house?

But Lily was getting married. Their youngest. Their last. Albus had been, to his own great pride, the first, and in spite of Ginny’s worries that Al had been far too young to be getting married—he had been a year older than Harry and Ginny had—he seemed genuinely, ecstatically happy. Young Ceci seemed even now thoroughly smitten with him.

Merlin. Soon enough the two would probably make him and Ginny grandparents. There was a thought.

James... Well, Harry still couldn’t say that he understood. He didn’t even know whether it was the fact that Scorpius was a man or that he was a Malfoy that made him uncomfortable. But, as Ginny pointed out at every opportunity, their eldest too had never been happier. And Scorpius had turned out to be much more pleasant company than his father, who seemed, it pleased Harry to think, even more uncomfortable with the whole arrangement than Harry himself.

Also, Scorpius was a huge, life-long Harpies fan, which made him all but family anyway.

The fact of the matter was that Harry wasn’t ready for Lily to marry. She was twenty-one, an auburn-haired chip off of her mother’s fiercely independent block—of her namesake grandmother’s as well, when it came to that. And Luna and Rolf’s boy had been her best friend since their first day at Hogwarts together. She was marrying him because she wanted to.

And Lysander loved Lily. Harry could see the look in his eyes, and remembered the feeling behind that look. When the two children had first become romantically involved during the summer after their sixth year, everyone had expected Harry to become insanely jealous and protective. But he had known that Lily was capable of taking care of herself—not that his heart hadn’t nearly broken for her during her occasional break-ups with the boy. No, the one Harry had worried about was Lysander, who was as dreamy as his mother and more determined than either of his parents.

Lysander Scamander. The name still made Harry chuckle.

Lily Scamander. 

No, Lily was ready. It was Harry who couldn’t get himself reconciled to the idea. 

And so he had thrown himself into the preparations for their wedding—just two months away now—with more energy than he had expended on anything in years. Caterers. Florists. The band—Harry had  wanted to talk to the Wyrd Sisters, who hadn’t played together in a few years, but Lily had shot that idea down; still, Roger had negotiated with the agent for Lily’s favorite group, The Crypt-Kicker Five, and it looked as if the hottest band in the wizarding world would be available that night. Harry had convinced Kingsley himself, recently retired, to officiate. The marquee company had to be hired—Wiltshire could get drizzly; no matter the Wizarding Weather Bureau said, they had to plan on rain. And of course there would have to be a team of wizards retained to cast Muggle-repelling charms. A full security detail was essential—times were relatively safe, but old Moody’s cry of Constant vigilance! had saved Harry’s bacon more than once.

Lupins. Would Lily and Lysander want lupins? Buckets of them around the dance floor. Or on the tables perhaps. The star-gazer lilies, of course; those were a given, but—

“You’re thinking about the wedding again, aren’t you?” Ginny was smirking up at him. The late-afternoon sun shone golden on her high, freckled cheeks and set her flame and ash hair ablaze.

“Uh, yeah.” Harry looked around. They were standing in front of the remains of his parents house—or what seemed to be the remains of the house. The whole of the ruin seemed to be encased in a living blanket of green, spangled with red and yellow. Nature was reclaiming the Potter home. Harry put his hand on the gate, and the familiar sign rose out of the bank of purple-tufted thistle: On this spot, on the night of 31 October, 1981... “A bit overrun. We’ll have to clear things a bit, if we want to sell it.”

“A bit,” laughed Ginny. She pushed open the gate—not easily—and pulled him through. Using her wand to clear their path, she walked him toward the house. “When was the last time you actually came in here? I haven’t been since that first summer.”

“When you wanted me to show you the rose garden.” He couldn’t help but grin at the memory: Ginny had wanted him to bring her to what was reputed to be one of the most romantic spots in Britain, but they hadn’t gotten much further than the side of the house before sinking into the grass and flowers and snogging each other silly. “Really, neither have I.” 

He always meant to come, of course, but there never seemed to be time. And Harry never really felt the urge to revisit the place where Voldemort had killed his parents.

Johnny Abbott, Hannah’s nephew and one of Teddy’s friends, lived in Godric’s Hollow and kept an eye on the property—both the house and the thirty acres of meadow and woodland behind it—but Johnny had a family of his own, these days, and so Harry hadn’t heard much from him recently. Harry knew that, for a time, Johnny had tried to keep the weeds and such to a minimum, but obviously the plants had won. Even standing ten feet from the old house, you could barely tell that people had ever lived there. It looked more like a hillock of wild roses and thistle, mixed in with spring wildflowers that Aunt Petunia would never have allowed in her garden, but that Ginny had taught him to recognize, back in the days when they’d gone hiking and snogging on the moors after her quicker Quidditch matches: coltsfoot and scarlet pimpernel, euphrasy and rue. Through the greenery, here and there, a blackened doorknob or the corner of a peeling blue shutter peeked out. Otherwise, there was no sign of the house in which Harry had been born, and which his parents had died. 

Harry was surprised to find this reassuring.

“Come on, Harry. I never did get to see the rose garden.” She led him through the weeds and flowers, which reached above her waist. They waded around to the side of the house, where the view of the dale and of the woods beyond opened up before them. No wonder they hadn’t got any further than this all of those years ago. He stopped, tugging his wife back toward him. Together they gazed out, watching the sun start its last slide toward the horizon. Kissing Ginny’s ear, he felt the urge to emulate it, and began to push her down into the high grass.

“Oh, no!” giggled Ginny. “That’s what stopped us before! I want to see the rose garden!” Tickling him so that he broke his grasp, she ran down the shallow incline, laughing as she went.

Harry gave a roar and charged after her—not an easy feat, with all those weeds to fight through. Really, she was much shorter than he was; shouldn’t it have been even harder for her? Instead she flitted just beyond his grasp, like a bloody snitch.

Suddenly she squawked and stopped. Before she could get away again, he barreled into her, grabbed her in his arms and kissed her.

The air here. It smelled like Ginny. Like the scent that had haunted him for most of his sixth year before he had figured out what it was that he was smelling: her. This.

Her fingers were tangled in his hair, her tongue tangled in his. One of his hands found its way inside of her Sensible Journalist robes and was pulling the tail of her blouse from her Sensible Journalist skirt.

“Fence,” hissed Ginny as his fingers began to play an old, familiar song upon her flesh. “Roses.”

“Huh,” grunted Harry, and lifted her; she wrapped her legs around his hips. Too many bloody clothes. Got to find somewhere we can take these off.

He tried to walk forward, but something was blocking the way. Fence. Right. Not a high fence though; without disengaging from kissing Ginny, he managed to step over the obstruction, and walk toward the low, dark berm that he could just make out through the strands of Ginny’s hair. Woods? A strong floral breeze wafted in the scant spaces between him and her, and it was that same Ginny scent...

Roses. Ah.

He strode forward: she’d see her roses, by Merlin—they’d make love amidst the bloody roses. It had been weeks since they’d had the time—the wedding and work had been swallowing whatever time or energy they had. Well, they had the time now. And they both seemed to have the energy. Without breaking the kiss, he tried to find a path into the garden, but it seemed to be a solid wall of flower-bedecked thorns, like something out of Sleeping Beauty or The Fountain of Fair Fortune....

The Fountain of Fair Fortune.

Harry disengaged his lips from his wife’s, who moaned at the unwelcome interruption. “Let us in,” he said. 

To his surprise, a gap opened in the wall of roses, forming an arched entryway. 

His wife still wrapped around him, his lips back where they both wanted them to be, Harry strode forward into the roses. Well, at least it wasn’t creepers pulling us through. 

Once Harry and Ginny had passed through the wall, they stopped  kissing. They both knew that there would be time for that later—plenty of time for that.

Harry had expected the interior of the rose garden to be as wild as the outside; he hadn’t really thought that there would be an interior—just a nice, private place for him and his wife to get up to the kinds of things that husbands and wives enjoy getting up to.

Instead, the garden looked...

It looked magnificent. 

There were hundreds of rose bushes in full bloom, no two seeming to be the same variety. Pink roses, red roses, white roses—damask, orange, lavender, silver, blue, even black. Each seemed to have been perfectly pruned to show off its distinctive glory. A manicured lawn filled the enormous central area, which was easily the size of a regulation Quidditch pitch.

At the opposite end of the green, directly below the almost-setting sun, bubbled a fountain, tall and alabaster, the clear water sparkling in the sunlight.

Ginny unwrapped her legs and stood beside him. “Wow.”

Harry couldn’t help but agree. “Wow.”

Hand in hand they strode toward the fountain. The burbling song of the water seemed the perfect compliment the heady scent of the flowers all around them. The fountain itself was carved with the figure of a goddess, scattering seeds.

Ginny peered at the fountain, her eyes wide,  reached out, and then pulled back her hand. “Do you suppose...?”

“I think...” Harry said, looking at the fountain, which for all that it was obviously very old, was bright white. “I think that either they created this because of the story—the Peverells, the Potters, whoever—or, maybe, Beedle based the story on this. Like the Cloak.”

“Right.” She started to reach out again to drink from the fountain, but stopped. “Hey,” she said. “Those aren’t roses.”

Growing to just behind the fountain was a clump of lilies—star-gazers, and like every other flower in the garden in full bloom.

The hair on the back of Harry’s neck lifted. He had spent far too long looking at specimens of this flower recently. He knew: these were perfect.

Walking toward them, he knelt down. At their base was a plaque: With these flowers (lilium ‘stargazer’), in this place, on this day, 19 June, 1979, James Charlus Potter was wed to Lily Elizabeth Evans

Harry felt as if the air had been expelled from his lungs. He reached out and touched the pollen-soaked pistil of the closest flower. The pollen came off on his finger.

“Harry.” Ginny was kneeling beside him in front of beautiful blue flower that had been blocked from their sight by the fountain. She read the plaque at its base: “With these flowers (calydorea amabilis), in this place, on this day, 2 September, 1939, Charlus Harold Potter was wed to Dorea Andromeda Black.

“Wow.” He looked past her; there were more. “Do you think...?”

Crawling, they made their way to the next plaque—Charlus’s sister, Damascena Victoria Potter. Harry’s great-aunt. Married to Hieronymus Abbott in 1935. Perhaps he and Hannah were cousins?

Before that... Harry’s great-grandparents. Married in 1913. Dumbledore might have been living in Godric’s Hollow then, Harry found himself thinking. Wonder if he attended?

The plaques stretched on and on, rounding the corner. Behind each bloomed a gorgeous, perfect specimen of the flower with which a couple had been married. Perhaps the flowers themselves.

The names shifted. They ran across an occasional Weasley and Prewett—no Malfoys, however. Potters disappeared; Harry found when a William Potter had married a Floribunda Wright in 1687. Then the Wrights too disappeared—there was Bowman Wright marrying Iris Peverell in 1518. The Peverells too had married here for several generations. The last plaque they came across was that marking the marriage of Ignotus Peverell to Rose Black in 1400. The beautiful rose bush behind the plaque bore blossoms that matched her family’s name.

This was Harry’s family tree. His family garden.

Harry sat back in the lush grass, stunned. Ginny curled herself into his lap and peered at him. Her face was slack.

“Did you know?” he asked.

She shook her head. “Mum had always talked about this place, about how it was... magical.”

Harry nodded. “I can’t wait to show this to her. She’ll be in heaven. And Neville!”

Before he could get any further carried away, she kissed him.

They made love there in the grass; it was sweet and unhurried and when they were done, they lay side by side on his Ministry-issue robes. The sun was setting, burnishing Ginny’s skin so that it matched her hair. Harry played his favorite game: connecting her freckles with her sweat.

Harry tried not to think about it, but felt sure that hundreds of Potters and Wrights and Peverells had made love here. Had pledged their love here. He smiled.

“So,” Ginny said, smiling in return, “still want to sell this place?”

“No.”

“Still think we need to hold Lily and Lysander’s wedding at Stonehenge?”

“No.”

She favored him with her most feral grin. “Care to have another go?”

He didn’t say anything at first, but merely entangled himself once again in the gold and flame of her. “What did I do,” he asked breathlessly, “to deserve such... fortune?”

Her answer came without words. And it was utterly, completely satisfying.



***

A/N: In case you're interested, yes, this fic is set in the same 'verse as my F Words fics—just thirty years later. And yes, I do have another installment or two in that series (including one that explains, in part, Dudley and Parvati)!

Here, FYI, was [info]elysianflowers's request:

    Favorite genres/types of fic/art: (angst, adventure, romance, dark, sexy, etc.) If fic, I love adventure, romance, time travel, comedy... I'm pretty easy, so long as the characters sound fairly true to themselves. If art, I like 20s, 30s art, or it could be fun to see something styled like a Marvel comic, and I have an embarrassing fondness for photo manips. or you could surprise me, I'm sure I'd like it.
    Requested elements: If it's your kind of thing, I'd love to read a story when H/G are around the age in the epilogue, after Lily's off at Hogwarts too! I'd like to hear a little about the life they've set up together, their friends and careers, while the main focus obviously is on the H/G dynamic, how would it develop with a bit more free time on their hands? If you can work in a boat journey that would be great! Furtive sex in a broom closet (or other small space anyone could walk in any moment) is also always welcome. One or all these would be fantastic.
    (optional) poetry, quote, or lyric for inspiration:
    In those days we were single, and we lived them one by one.
    Now we hardly see 'em, they don't walk, they run.
    But I got plenty left I've set my sight on,
    Don't wait up leave the light on, I'll be home soon.- Chris Smither, Leave the Light On
    or what about 'Anybody can be good in the country. There are no temptations there.'- Wilde
    Squicks and elements to leave out: um, nothing too extreme if you're doing NC17, though it doesn't have to be pure vanilla. Not pure fluff, not angst either, otherwise I'm open.
    Favorite things to write/draw:
    Squicks and things you don't want to write/draw: I haven't really written anything explicit before, so would prefer not to write anything too sexy this time. If I'll be drawing, I'd probably have to do it by hand with pencils and scanning it, so it'd have to be for someone who doesn't mind the art not being too high-tech!


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[info]cibjasfad

April 9 2009, 21:50:44 UTC 3 years ago

I think this is beautiful. Simple and elegant and it made me really feel a connection to the couple, as well as Godric's Hollow. Thank you.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 10 2009, 21:29:36 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much—simple and elegant is all the reaction that I could ask for!

[info]birlan

April 9 2009, 22:14:41 UTC 3 years ago

Very nice. Harry off the tracks financially is a unique idea--but how he got there is amusing. It makes sense that he never worried about money and is surprised when he notices. Great little details--not sure how Parvati and Dudley came to be connected but will be interested in seeing how they do.

Great garden.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 10 2009, 23:56:42 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks! I think I'd gotten a bit bored of stories where Harry was super-wealthy, and—being of an age and living in a time when money worries are a bit of a constant—I thought I'd share them with Mr. Potter.

I don't think he enjoyed them much. ;-)

But he did seem to enjoy the garden, and I'm glad that you did too!

[info]lyras

April 9 2009, 22:27:58 UTC 3 years ago

1. Yay, I get to read your fic while mine sits in the moderation queue. Excellent timing!

2. You and your f words. :P

On to the story!

He took Ginny’s hand and kissed it, and Harry remembered for a flash why he had disliked Roger when they were young. Roger chuckled again, and it was quickly forgotten.

I love this - it's such a good description of the way emotions flash through our minds.

They unsqueezed into the West Country landscape

Lovely wording!

Scorpius had turned out to be much more pleasant company than his father, who seemed, it pleased Harry to think, even more uncomfortable with the whole arrangement than Harry himself.

Heh. This strikes me as very true to character all-round.

I loved the description of Lily and Lysander's relationship - really sweet, especially as it's from Harry's POV.

spring wildflowers that Aunt Petunia would never have allowed in her garden, but that Ginny had taught him to recognize, back in the days when they’d gone hiking and snogging on the moors after her quicker Quidditch matches

I really like the way you tell us so much about Harry and Ginny's life together in this section - it's full of lovely details, but never feels like an infodump.

As for the rose garden - wow. Such a wonderful idea, and of course, the perfect substitute for Stonehenge.

The ending is gorgeous, and now I am all smiley. Thank you!

[info]lyras

April 11 2009, 03:41:31 UTC 3 years ago

I just recced this here, btw.

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[info]lunalovepotter

April 10 2009, 01:30:23 UTC 3 years ago

This is absolutely gorgeous. Thank you so much for writing it. :)

[info]mickawber_fics

April 16 2009, 15:53:20 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[info]almond_joyz

April 10 2009, 01:56:05 UTC 3 years ago

this was absolutely beautiful

the garden was a portrait in words and I saw every bit....

[info]mickawber_fics

April 16 2009, 15:55:36 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you so much! The idea for the fic—and the garden—sort of snuck up on me; I'm glad that it worked for you.

[info]elysianflowers

April 10 2009, 11:54:53 UTC 3 years ago

yee! Thank you,thank you, thank you! I adore this. Lily and Lysander, Dudley and Parvati! Two interesting new ships to ponder :) (and Roger and Lisa! I adore StMargarets' story, so unseen bonus!) It was great to see Harry so into the wedding planning, and Potters in financial trouble is an original take- though it makes perfect sense they would get through life with casual and immense generosity that would lead to this. I loved the Harry/Ginny interaction here- you can tell their whole life has been like this, Ginny just knowing what Harry's feeling, and gently leading him to the right conclusions. Any rose gardens they find along the way is magic recognising the love that exists between them. And the garden was perfect! I imagine they'll be coming back there quite often, not just for wedding planning :) hurrah for f words!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:39:08 UTC 3 years ago

You're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this!

The St. Margarets' reference felt... absolutely necessary, in a way. I mean, if you're going to write a fluffily romantic H/G story with mythic overtones, you've GOT to tip your hat to the master, don't you think? ;-)

And yes, I imagine Harry and Ginny will be returning to the garden as often as they can. With any luck, they won't be running into Lysander and Lily there—that would be... awkward. :-)

[info]lemondrop34

April 10 2009, 13:58:10 UTC 3 years ago

This was just brilliant! It flowed so well and so easily that even the thought of James with Draco's son (hey, only because he's the evil ferret's son, not because he's gay!) didn't give me much pause - LOL - I actually rather like the idea of it!

I really enjoyed how you had Harry being a sweet and concerned dad in regards to Lily, but not a particularly over-protective one. There was that line: "...everyone had expected Harry to become insanely jealous and protective. But he had known that Lily was capable of taking care of herself—..." That makes such sense to me in regards to Harry's character!

Oh, and the thought of them having to sell Godric's Hollow! I kept saying to myself, "No, no, no, Harry, wake up! Don't do it!"

The description of the garden at Godric's Hollow at the end was just breathtaking! The beautiful flowers, the plaques..iIt seemed obvious to me that this was where Lily and Lysander should be married. I'm so glad Harry and Ginny felt that way too!

I thought it was especially well-done to have the scent of the flowers be so similiar to the scent of Ginny's. I always felt that Ginny was like "home" to Harry so this was just a powerful means to show that!

BTW, great characterization of their relationship! Loved the interactions between them, how comfortable they were with each other, and, most importantly, how passionate they still are together. I really enjoyed how Harry still gets a bit jealous: "He took Ginny’s hand and kissed it, and Harry remembered for a flash why he had disliked Roger when they were young." I *swoon* for a jealous Harry. (Er, ah, not tooooo jealous, but just lightly, like he is portrayed here!)

Anyway, this was a joy to read!

Thank you!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:47:35 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you! I'm so glad that this worked for you—even the thought of James with Scorpius. (Honestly? I was tired of the many (wonderful) fics that automatically paired Scorpius with Rose or Albus. I mean, why not James. ;-) Also, I rather enjoyed the idea of Harry getting a kick out of Draco's discomfort.)

As a dad myself—one whose eldest daughter recently took up with her first boyfriend—I'm with Harry: not all dad's fly into fits of jealous rage, full of terror at what that boy might get up to. Besides, it seems more like a Ron kind of thing. ;-)

And I'm glad that you enjoyed the garden. The connection between Ginny's scent and the flowers was a surprise to me, but it seemed perfect once I found it; I'm glad that that too worked for you!

[info]mollywheezy

April 11 2009, 01:54:38 UTC 3 years ago

Wonderful story! I loved your detailed description of the garden and the plaques. That's a perfect place for a wedding. I also really enjoyed how you moved Harry's opinion of "fortune" as only being money to having a much broader meaning. Great job!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:49:22 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this! And yeah—fortune is a slippery concept, isn't it? ;-)

[info]hollydoodle19

April 11 2009, 08:23:59 UTC 3 years ago

This is gorgeous and beautiful and sweet and just perfect Harry/Ginny, I smiled most of the way through and the rose garden took my breath away :D

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:49:45 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad that this made you smile. :-)

[info]werewolfsfan

April 11 2009, 11:33:09 UTC 3 years ago

Here via the rec from [info]lyras. This is just gorgeous. Great story line, interesting, unusual details, not generic, you've embraced Rowling's magical world and canon and enhanced it with your romanticism. I adore this story!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:52:24 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! (And thanks to [info]lyras too!) I'm glad that this was fresh for you.

[info]flyingcarpet

April 11 2009, 14:01:16 UTC 3 years ago

This is lovely. The imagery here is wonderful -- I can picture the entire garden in my mind, and it fits perfectly into the HP world. I totally agree with the other commenters -- this is Romantic with a capital R.

So glad I managed to squeeze you in at the last minute!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:57:05 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad that the capital-R-Romanticism here worked for you.

And thank you too for creating this exchange! Once again you've brought about a flood of wonderful, non-generic Harry/Ginny fics and art—and the world is definitely a better place for it. :-)

[info]hmrpotter

April 13 2009, 01:58:36 UTC 3 years ago

Wow, this is absolutely beautiful!!! Especially your concept of Harry's family tree!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 14:58:29 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! The family garden/family tree pun came to me literally as I was writing the sentence—which probably means that I came up with it later than most of the people who read the story. But it did sort of fit, didn't it?

[info]wickedsprite

April 13 2009, 06:19:04 UTC 3 years ago

From the imagery to the premise, this is a really gorgeous piece. I especially love the idea of all Potter and Peverell men starting their lives in the garden and planting flowers for their wives. It reminds me so much of local folklore which I think greatly compliments the HP universe. Loves this muchly! :)

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 15:00:42 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! I've been reading Tales of Beedle the Bard to my youngest, and I love the way that she captures standard folkloric themes and puts them into the context of the Potterverse. When I was thinking through [info]elysianflowers's prompt (not to mention her user name!), I thought perhaps I would take that process one step further. I'm glad that it worked for you!

[info]tosca1390

April 14 2009, 15:32:24 UTC 3 years ago

I love the use of Godric's Hollow in this, especially the family garden, with all the plaques. Harry still finding out things about his family later in life was a lovely touch.

Very nice!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 15:01:06 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed this.

[info]siriusrocks18

April 15 2009, 06:12:02 UTC 3 years ago

i absolutely loved this.

thanks for sharing this with us!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 15:01:30 UTC 3 years ago

You're very welcome! Thank you!

[info]ap_aelfwine

April 17 2009, 18:55:37 UTC 3 years ago

Nicely done! This is probably the best use of the epilogue!verse I've seen.

Although I do have to admit that the Flaming Nargle shipper in me was thinking "Hey, wait a minute, isn't Lysander/Lily incest?" (I know, I know, AU and all that. :-)

[info]mickawber_fics

April 17 2009, 21:35:03 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks!

And... yeah, well. The wonderful thing about fandom is that, after a certain point, we can all decide what is AU in any particular circumstance, you know? ;-)

[info]stumps101

April 19 2009, 08:24:27 UTC 3 years ago

Very nicely done. Really enjoyed the fic and I think the garden was an absolutely lovely idea.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 19 2009, 17:00:54 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you so much!

[info]laurel_potter

April 19 2009, 23:15:54 UTC 3 years ago

Wow... just wow.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 20 2009, 04:34:53 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks! :-D

[info]girlspell

April 20 2009, 01:02:33 UTC 3 years ago

Just a lovely story. I love the simplicity of it. I also love the descriptive writing.

I couldn't help but think that it twas sad that Harry & Ginny were missing from stone records.

If you ever write a story centering around their wedding. That place would be it.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 20 2009, 04:36:00 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much!

I actually thought about writing an epilogue in which H & G have a recommitment ceremony, and plant their own flowers to extend the family tree....

[info]stmargarets

April 20 2009, 12:16:24 UTC 3 years ago

David! I totally missed this! There have been so many stories coming fast and furious this past week, that I haven't been able to keep up.

Did you here my 'squee' across many time zones when I first read Roger acting in the capacity of a lawyer? And then the *double squee* when H/G gave their love to Lisa?

I'm all smiles. What a sweetheart you are to remember.

So - on to your lovely story. It's fun to see Harry and Ginny as beleagured members of the middle class, having used their various legacies to persue careers of the heart. It makes perfect sense that after caring for three children and four properties they would be bit strapped when having to throw out a lot of money at once. It's also fun to see how H/G have gone over all of the posibilities before but are still airing out each contingency - the talking has gone beyond solution finding to something else. Kind of part reality check/part well, we're in this together even though we don't have a clue. That's so married. :)

And the trip to Godric's Hollow! Such a lovely inversion of Harry's trip through the graveyard with Hermione. It's summer instead of winter, it's a living memorial with the same names as those on the tombstones. Perfect.


Love this fairytale passage:

The Fountain of Fair Fortune.

Harry disengaged his lips from his wife’s, who moaned at the unwelcome interruption. “Let us in,” he said.

To his surprise, a gap opened in the wall of roses, forming an arched entryway.


I do so love *magic* in a fan fic. - and a new magical location that fits in perfectly with canon, well, I'm enchanted.

Love so many other details - the star-gazer lily (perfect for JKR's flower namesakes) how Harry compares Ginny to a Snitch, how careful you are to show how H/G shed their work-a-day clothes in this magical place that has been provided for them and their daughter's happiness.

Lilies of the field indeed.

Your ships are so fun, too. I can imagine the wedding with all of these couples having a great time.



[info]mickawber_fics

April 24 2009, 05:39:57 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, come on--if I'm going to come up with a wizard solicitor, how on earth could I do better than simply to steal one of the Davies brothers??? Besides, Roger and Lisa was one of the first fics that really taught me that a fic could be, for all intents and purposes, truly original, and yet true to canon. And the romance, realism and magic could exist side by side in the same narrative. So yeah--I stole Roger. And I'd do it again!

It was fun writing a Harry who WASN'T fabulously wealthy--who was struggling with all of the same frustrations and limitations that the rest of us do. (Hey--I started my fic writing career with a middle-aged Harry. I guess it's a case of write what you know!) And yeah--the 'problem-solving' session felt very familiar to me as I was writing it....

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the garden! I'll be honest with you: it felt like a very [info]stmargarets place to write about. And yes, a very [info]stmargarets bit of magic to plop into the West Country landscape -- romantic, just a bit mythic... So that it worked for you makes my day.

It's funny: I was in fact very, very conscious of having their attitudes and modes of thought shift as they left London behind and got closer to the garden, but the clothes? I... uh... I hadn't noticed that I'd done that. I fully intended that too, of course. ^.^

And yes, all those couples. I can imagine them all having a good time there too... Hopefully not TOO good a time... at least, hopefully, not all at once. XD

In any case, thank you again!

(I have started my comment on your fic, which I loved -- Mary writes crabby, frustrated Harry! Woohoo! I will finish the comment soon, I promise.)

[info]madderbrad

April 22 2009, 08:25:42 UTC 3 years ago

A fanfic with Harry impoverished ... well, at least, not mega-rich!? Isn't that against fanon law, which mandates his Gringotts vault to be perpetually overflowing? :-)

Dudley, one-legged, on an Army pension. Parvati, spell-blind, her Ministry diplomatic career gone.

I'm certainly keen to know more about these two. And exactly what 'spell-blind' means. Poor Parvati. :-(

Luna and Rolf’s boy had been her best friend since their first day at Hogwarts together.

Ah, the *very best* romantic relationship to write of and contemplate, one of deep long-lasting friendship evolving into love! *nods*

I loved the 'Roger & Lisa' reference; it's fun watching you authors play in each others yards as well as Rowling's world.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 24 2009, 17:46:38 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks, Brad!

It is against fanon law—along with writing a Draco who isn't devastatingly handsome and witty or a Snape who isn't sex on wheels. My fanon author's union card has been in jeopardy for years, so somehow I don't think that this infraction is likely to put me in any worse stead. ;-)

Boy, you're right—the very best romantic relationship: like the first person your age you meet from the wizarding world, someone who shares your values, your temperament, your sense of humor, even your athletic pursuits... I'm glad that we agree at last! ;-)

Playing in St. Margarets's yard is like an art student getting the keys to the Louvre. There's just so much to steal use for inspiration. ;-)

And yeah—I'll have at least a bit about Dudley and Parvati. I've got the beginning of a fic about the two of them; I'll see where it takes me!

[info]madderbrad

3 years ago

[info]irislock

April 22 2009, 16:24:31 UTC 3 years ago

Wow. This is just so, so lovely. Lyras and St. Margarets have touched on my favorite bits, but I'll repeat:

unsqueezed into the West country landscape
For some reason, I just love this phrase

I haven't read the Roger & Lisa series, but I thought your Roger was brilliant - such a lawyer! And the bit about "his after hours laugh, not his office laugh" was so decriptive.

Scorpius/James - love this! Why not James indeed. And Scorpius being a life long Harpies fan was just the right touch.

The garden is spectacular - and I think my imagination probably doesn't do it justice - I want someone to illustrate this story, like yesterday.

It's not just that Harry's daughter gets to marry in the place where his parents did, it's the fact that it's Lily (named for a flower) and Lysander (child of naturalists) that makes it so perfectly fitting. (That's an awkward sentence, but you know what I mean, right?)

I love your portrayal of their marriage - long standing, familiar, and comfortable, but not without challenges and passion. Nice.

St. Margaret's point about the trip to Godric's Hollow being an inversion of Harry's trip there with Hermione is spot-on.

Now that the kids are all gone, I want them to sell Grimmauld Place and move here!

*considers changing username to IrisPeverell* :)

[info]mickawber_fics

April 24 2009, 18:06:52 UTC 3 years ago

Ooooh! [info] would be such a cool name! XD

(It's funny—I tried to come up with appropriate flowers for as many of the women here as I could. JKR, with her love of floral names made that pretty easy. But as I think about what sort of flower Ginny and Harry would have planted I'm a bit stumped! I did, however, discover two things that I didn't know. First, ginevra is Dutch for "juniper"—from whose berries the Dutch first distilled gin. So maybe a lovely juniper bush? Not as showy as some of the other plants, but... Second, one of only seventeen extant paintings by Leonardo da Vinci is of a gorgeous young redhead with bright brown eyes named Ginevra de' Benci. Hmmm.)

It's funny—unsqueezed into the West Country landscape was one of my favorite bits too... and I can't tell you why.

You should read Roger and Lisa! It's definitely romantic, very well written, and has a spark of magic at its heart that's quite wonderful. SM has an amazing knack for taking hardly-there canon characters (Lisa Turpin is never anything but a name and a house) and bringing them stunningly to life. When I decided I needed to give the Potters a legal/financial advisor, I knew it had to be Roger.

And yeah—I'd love someone to draw this. :sigh: Would that I had any skill as a visual artist, but I can't draw water, as they say....

I did get your point about Lily and Lysander! It's a great point—one that I hadn't really thought about! (I had thought of the fact that Lysander, like his namesake from Shakespeare, should meet his beloved in nature. But that's me!)

A good marriage rarely makes for a good story—I'm glad that this one worked for you. :-D

And yeah—Harry and Hermione's midwinter visit to Godric's Hollow really tantalized my imagination, mostly because you never really got to see the house as a house at all—except in Voldemort's memories, of all places! I wanted to bring that back to life, and when I thought about the rose garden that Ginny had mentioned in "Family," the walled garden in "Fountain of Fair Fortune" came to mind... and that's where this came from.

Funny enough, I'd already decided on the title before I made the connection with Beedle's story. Clearly it was meant to be! ;-)

And yeah, I agree: a move to the country is definitely in order.

In any case thank you, as always, for your feedback.

[info]meri_oddities

April 22 2009, 21:21:01 UTC 3 years ago

Lovely. Just lovely.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 24 2009, 05:05:33 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks!

[info]shiiki

April 23 2009, 04:12:39 UTC 3 years ago

Beautiful. I very much enjoyed your Harry. The descriptions that you wove into the piece really brought Godric's Hollow to life!

[info]mickawber_fics

April 24 2009, 05:04:16 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much!

I felt as if we got just a glimpse of Godric's Hollow--enough to tantalize. I obviously wanted to see what else was to be seen. :-)

[info]grandma_kate

April 26 2009, 15:29:26 UTC 3 years ago

This is a charming story with enchanting descriptions. St Margarets recommended that her flist come over and read your Lily/Lysander story, so I know you will have a lot of click traffic very soon. I not only read the story but all of the comments and replies, so I know that others have pointed out many of the endearing aspects of Ginny and Harry as about to become empty-nesters.

Harry's family tree as expressed as a magical family garden is genius. I can imagine many family weddings and renewals of vows growing out of your idea. Thank you for letting me read it.

[info]mickawber_fics

April 27 2009, 22:32:02 UTC 3 years ago

Thanks so much! As someone still a few years from empty-nest-dom, I've obviously been thinking about it quite a lot. I'm glad that you felt that Ginny and Harry's journey was endearing! ;-)

And yeah—I can see all sorts of family celebrations happening in that garden... and some more private ones as well.

Thank you for the feedback!
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